Poem--reply to free peom

[Đậu Diễm Phương (send2phuong)]

Poem

Since our poems have no rule
Would it be like a tent in rags?
Would it let the winds visit often?
Would it last for long in this immense galaxy?
Since the nature is natural and cruel...

I am not so sure of the free style poem
I am not so sure rule's columns can help
I am sure that winds can cross through our mind
Because even a stable house has window

Just please give your truth feeling in poem
The honesty in your writing
The honesty that you're touched by others' writing
The honesty--the last thing to hold because...

Winds can blow away our tent
if you let yoursefl be so free in winds
Open your breath and give the way for wind
To feel you and you feel the wind

Winds cannot come if your house's so enclosed
You will live by the fake sunshine
You will breath by the fake atmosphere
That paralyze your imagine

Then you ask me how should we build our shelter?
I look at your eyes
I point at your heart
That is your shelter
That place you store your mind
That place you take note of emotion
That place people find you
That place you are safe...

Love poem, then make poem
Nature is beautiful and various
Our hearts are the emgine of nature
Therefore, your poems are the paths
Be proud of your feeling,
Best wish,
Phuong Dau.