Feeling Down--my Frist Poem

[Đậu Diễm Phương (send2phuong)]

Wish that we can press the button to stop the clock.
I am sick of it!
Go ahead my friend,
chase your dream and never give up!

I want to burn the world
and myself in the fire.
To see who can stand
longer...and longer...

best wish,
Phuong.​

P/s: I am not a good writer. It was my frist peom and the very meaningful one to me I made when I was in the extreme furiousness of confronting my will with the obstacles. I made one of my most difficult journey when being an exchange student in USA. At that time, I got to know a friend from amsterdam hs. She witnessed for my challenge and encouraged me to continue my goal. I promise my story is very interesting that you have never heard in the world.

 

[Nguyễn Hà Phương (phhn)]

i like your poem its kinda simple but very meaningful somehow it really fits my mood now
btw , i dont think " feeling down " is a good tittle for this poem .

 

[Đậu Diễm Phương (send2phuong)]

i like your poem its kinda simple but very meaningful somehow it really fits my mood now
btw , i dont think " feeling down " is a good tittle for this poem .

its name is "feeling down", because I dìd feel down. Most of my poems begin with a very sad mood, then I remind myself that i shouldn't be that depressed. "Give yourself a door to escape!"
Thanks,